Monday 31 May 2010

Summer Storm

Rain softly falls nurturing the crops
Fertile earth odours tease the senses,
But all the while I feel disconnected.
Silver light flashes from wind dance leaves
Glancing through the edges of life's soul
Dancing, teasing, beckoning; life's wheel turning
And sun bursts through dark cloud with hope returning

Liz and I wrote this a line at a time on Facebook - loving what a status update on facebook can generate

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

I love this, you really gain a sense of movement and burgeoning urgency with it

Sally Stafford said...

this is great...I'm seeing facebook in a whole new light x